Automatic Freestyle

Any ideas on how to sum up a3s in about 250 characters? Something catchy for webcomic collection sites that'll make people come to check it out? Any ideas?

This is the best I have so far;

A group of students looking back (and forth) over their lives covering a whole sort of general mish-mash: dev-bats, spabbits, love triangles, a bazooka-wielding girl created from an accident involving a laptop upgrade and some cherryade…

Looking forward to your suggestions ^_^

Feh, I suck at summaries and can't think of anything right now. Lame I know!

Your summary ends well, but sounds boring to begin with. I know the characters are technically students (of one form or another, depending on what time the comic is in) but it doesn't really seem relevant to most of the silly fun cute things I like about your comic, and makes it sound a little dull/student oriented, which is isn't. Easy to be the critic when you can't think of anything yourself though. I'll ponder some and get back to ya.

Hmmm, cute is the comment most make about your comic, you say (and it is) so that is probably your main selling point.

Well, they were/are (uni) students when the comic began and it's always set in that 'time' although the comic keeps bouncing everywhere and not just with (high school student and other) flashbacks/forwards. The fourth-wall often gets shattered into a million pieces. I didn't want to use the word 'random' coz the internet has overused it... and not sure if I can call my own comic 'cute' or not in a description yet that is how it's described the most by people.

Do agree it needs changing though...

Hmm, how about:

Often described as cute, A3S is the jumbled up past & present experiences of a bunch of students with lots of silliness including dev-bats, spabbits, love triangles and the occasional appearance of a bazooka-wielding girl!

Side note: Now that you've brought it up, I wanna see Kiki in bazooka mode again - maybe as a form of spabbit control? If you're gonna mention it on the summary, it deserves another appearance, don't ya think?

Might be a way to go. Should either start like that or simply something like; “A (rather?) cute comic about…”

Mentioning it, maybe I shouldn’t tag Kiki as a bazooka girl (sounds more like another character of mine from a different story), she’s supposed to be rather polite/nice anyway though that does make it funny when someone does cross the line against her. I shall see about giving the bazooka a third appearance just for you though Roofee, lol, spabbit control indeed.

Maybe I should refer to Kiki as something else (girl created from a laptop – type thing) or put something different?